Hey MrOfficial, welcome to Newgrounds Audio Portal!
Personally I really like that bass, its fucking funky yo. I dig it.
Im not really a fan of the snares you chose to go with, they sound very computer generated to me, and not very authentic, but thats just me my man.
I dig that piano? Or synth? Im not sure what it is, but I like the melody that it has, it works well with the bass line.
This has got a pretty relaxed and chill vibe to it, especially at around 2 minutes in, where it picks up.
Those snares just eat at me, lol. I dig the hats, they are subtle but recognizable, they dont stick out like a sore thumb, which is a good thing, you never want them to overpower your other instruments and samples. The bass kicks are pretty nice too, though Im a fan of heavy and aggressive kicks.
Over all, good job for one of your second upload on the Oldschool Hip Hop Audio Portal.
Glad to have you here man and I cant wait to hear more stuff from you, especially as you improve your skill. Keep at it man.
-Blest