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[CLAB - Future vs Senator]

DJ Future | Verse One |

Not bad man. Your flow was pretty good. I could have seen some of those disses coming from a mile away, like the Butt Head reference. You come off flow like two or three times, but then jump back on it.
Your personals are ok, i mean, you made the reference of not knowing who he was, haha.

Senator John Dean | Verse One |

Slaughter? lol.
Wow. You just attacked him hard as hell in this one.
Great flow, great disses, great use of vocab, and awesome metaphors.

DJ Future | Verse Two |

Damn. You didnt like that last verse of his, did you? haha.
You came back with intent to end him and you didnt do a bad job.
Good rhymes, better flow, just generally better everything.

Senator John Dean | verse Two |

Haha. Wow. Great flow, decent rhymes on this one.
I thought your first verse was WAY better. Nice last 4 bars at the end there, haha.
Again though, on this verse man, it was like everywhere with the lyrics. You lost me here lol.

Overall i give my vote to | Senator John Dean |

* In my opinion I thought Senator John Dean had a better flow, better rhyme scheme, better disses, better personal attacks, and generally better sound. I had to listen to this a couple times because I couldnt understand why Senator John Dean didnt shred his second verse like he did his first. If DJ Future wanted to win, he should have tried to do more research and then hit hard as shit in the first verse. Overall decent battle. *
( 3.5 stars, disappointed at the final outcome of the battle, it could have been better since these two MC's arnt shitty, obviously. )

[Clab - Pigpen Vs Teqneek]

Round One.

PiGPEN | Verse One |

" Over easy, Teqneek hes so beneath me "
- Good flow. Good overall rhyme scheme and diction. Your punch lines were decent, some of them were straight funny though, hehe.

Teqneek | Verse One |

Great diction, great punches, good personals. Your flow was sort of sketchy at times, but overall they were good.

PiGPEN | Verse Two |

I fell like your first one was better, you didnt take advantage on some of his lines and mess ups, which I swore you would. With that said. Overall the flow was ok, your punches were ok, you just needed some more personals in there.

Teqneek | Verse Two |

Good come backs in this verse, you took complete advantage of PiGPEN not hitting harder than expected. I think this verse seals the deal for me. Overall, again, great.

Overall my vote goes to | Teqneek |

* When it came down to flow and personal disses, I felt like Teqneek won. However, PiGPEN's first verse good and would have held more weight if his second one would have been harder. Because I was disappointed with PiGPEN's second verse, plus the fact Teqneek smacked him for not being better, I had to give it to Teqneek. *

( 3.5 due to PiGPEN not stepping up and full filling the expectations of a better second verse )

[CLAB - Obsideo vs Raven]

Obsideo | Verse One |

Good flow, good rhymes man. Good punches.
You pretty much nailed it on your first verse here man.

MC Raven | Verse One |

Good flips man. Some of them are questionable, but over all, you came out swinging back.
Good flow, and a brit accent lol.

Obsideo | Verse One |

Damn. Pretty much on point again with your flow and rhymes.
Punches were decent, I felt you could have hit a bit harder, like you did in your first.

MC Raven | Verse Two |

Wow. Great flips again. You hit harder in this one than your last verse IMO.
" How that for a quote? "
Nice finisher there, a good little last punch at the end, lol.

Overall my vote goes to | MC Raven |

The reason I gave it to Raven and not Obsideo is because, out of all the brit rappers in this comp, I feel that he is up there near the best of them. Obsideo, youre not bad man, keep at it. My vote may not matter when it comes to tallying, but I just want to see Raven move on. Nothing personal.

Great battle guys.
( 4 for good flows and rhymes across the board )

[CLAB - Flip P vs TehSlap]

Flip | Verse One |

Not bad man. I wish you used better vocab, move from the 8th grade level to college shit.
Your flow is very old school sounding, sounds like its got a heavy influence in you, which is a good thing.

Slap | Verse One |

I hate your flow man... So much.
But you are funny lol. Your lyrics arnt bad at all, I just cant take you seriously man lol.

Flip | Verse Two |

Way better than your first one. More punches than the last verse, great rhymes, great flow. Over all good second verse man.

Slap | Verse Two |

The santa diss missed.
A lot of your disses on your second werent nearly as prolific as your first verse.
The dane cook line made me geek, haha.
Overall, I still hate your flow, haha, not as great punches, and more rambling.

Overall my vote goes to | Flip Point |
( 3.5 for his flow )

[CLAB - Emrox vs Richard]

Rich J A won in my opinion.
His punches and flow were much better than Emroxs, I kind of wish he didnt have such a bad mic.
He would have sounded better if he had the right equipment for recording.

Other than that, both of them had good lyrics, I personally like JA's more though.
Great battle. Good luck to the both of you :D

p.s. Emrox. Get a new mic man so, or stop fucking with your audio tracks so much lol.

[CLAB - I'mHigh vs Gambit]

Gambit hands down.
Props to High for trying to freestyle.

I am truly getting sick of hearing people talk during the battle.
This is ClabTrap, not Skype. Chat somewhere else please. :D

[CLAB - Teqneek vs Lil C]

Teq for the win.
I lawled at his last 4 lol.

Awesome. Lil C, you should stop rapping, start learning to bake instead.

[CLAB - AxTekk vs FatBeats]

@exstatification, lol?
I dont get it... I take that as an insult.

@Contenders, Anyways... I have to give this to FatBeats, I enjoyed his flow over Axtekk's.
I also thought that FatBeats had better lines, just overall.
I could also understand him better, which I feel like it helps. ( Not a mic issue, a slurring issue, clearly )

FatBeats to go on...
Ax, work on pronouncing your words better, and youll see improvement.

[CLAB - Rampant vs Blest]

" Ive already won and I dont really care. Your flow was never there, it David Copperfield in to the air. "

I was seriously think about putting all my lyrics down, but decided to just pick that one line, lawl.

Much love to Big Red for hosting the comp and ClabTrap for just being awesome.
( I dont give a fuck what you other faggots say about ClabTrap, keep on hating ;D )

[Subliminal - lil c ft IOU]

Not bad man.
You have like a Lil Wayne feel to your flow.
I personally hate his music, but at least youve got some decent lines here.

Point is, anyone could be signed IMO over Lil Wayne, lol. Over all decent track man.
3

EmpireMusic responds:

thank you bro ..preciate the honesty, and the time for takin the time to listen the track, and every line, much love

God Bless